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The Jekyll and Hyde Components of the Legal Profession

Our justice system depends on the functional training of future lawyers in law schools across the country. This legal training is a flawed one filled with many countervailing forces. The most significant of these contrasting forces are the desire to educate legal and social leaders who, with the proper legal morals and sense of justice, can best serve their clients and the general population, and the economic drain this form of education imposes on future lawyers causing them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors upon graduation. We will refer to the former force as the Jekyll component and the latter as the Hyde component.


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The training of future lawyers is made up of one prevailing force but the system in which this force rests comes with an underlying contrasting force. The prevailing force is the law school system trying to educate legal leaders who will go into the world with the proper legal morals and sense of justice to best serve their clients and the general population at large; we will refer to this as the Jekyll component. The underlying contrasting force inspired by the capitalistic law school system, the Hyde component, is the draining of these “future lawyers” of economic capital driving them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors upon graduation.

Why spend all this verbal complexity to make the idea harder to get? Law school trains people to seek justice, but costs so much that young lawyers sell out instead to service the debt. Done in less than 25 simple words.

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Our justice system depends on the functional training of future lawyers in law schools across the country. This legal training is a flawed one filled with many countervailing forces. The most significant of these contrasting forces are the desire to educate legal and social leaders who, with the proper legal morals and sense of justice, can best serve their clients and the general population, and the economic drain this form of education imposes on future lawyers causing them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors upon graduation. We will refer to the former force as the Jekyll component and the latter as the Hyde component.
 

The underlying consequences of the current system

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Law schools pride themselves on the idea that they are training Mr. Jekylls, client devoted and resourceful individuals, to venture into the world swinging the hammer of justice in the name of the oppressed. In reality the system in which law schools train their students has an underlying crippling effect. The necessity to repay six figures worth of loans is feeding these innate Hyde tendencies. Graduating and having Uncle Sam knocking on their door is sending students crawling to big firms with the innocent intentions of working a couple of years and eventually pursuing the true reasons they came to law school. My guess as to why they are so many unhappy people at big firms is because they weren’t meant to be there to begin with. They are not becoming the leaders they were meant to be but rather are now sheep. Steven Harper the author of “The Lawyer Bubble: A Profession in Crisis,” alludes to the possible reasons why lawyers have one of the most “miserable” jobs out there. Harper states, "You didn't go to law school because you thought you're getting to sit in front of a computer screen for hour after hour after hour reviewing documents.” "You thought you'd get into court once in a while, maybe meet a client, maybe do a deal, be involved in a transaction in a significant way” (http://www.businessinsider.com/steven-harper-on-unhappy-lawyers-2013-4#ixzz2ZWFSqK4w).
 
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Law schools pride themselves on the idea that they are instructing Jekylls, client loving and creative individuals, to go into the world swinging the hammer of justice in the name of innocent people or organizations. In reality the system in which law schools train their students have an underlying crippling effect. The necessity to repay six figures worth of loans is feeding these innate Hyde tendencies. Graduating and having Uncle Sam knocking on their door is sending students crawling to big firms with the innocent intentions of working a couple of years and eventually pursuing the true reasons they came to law school. My guess as to why they are so many unhappy people at big firms is because they weren’t meant to be there to begin with. They are not becoming the leaders they were meant to be but rather are now sheep.

I think back to my passionate goals of helping some weak unrepresented group in my personal statement and wonder why being canned meat doesn’t seem quite so bad, at least just for a little bit. I can help my group of choice for the time being with the simple signing of a check; perhaps one can make a reasonable argument that this of course doesn’t initiate true change. I feel more the pressures of paying off the large amounts of accumulated student loans than the pressure to stay the course one would believe I was on by reading my personal statement. Maybe the problem is that law students are being instructed in the ideologies of Jekyll but not instructed as to how to make this ideology economically salient on their own without the aid of some other firm or organization.

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I reminisce about my past ambitions of helping some weak unrepresented group I wrote about in my personal statement. I wonder why now being canned meat doesn’t seem quite so bad, at least just for a little bit. I can help my group of choice for the time being with the simple signing of a check; perhaps one can make a reasonable argument that this of course doesn’t initiate true change. I feel more the pressures of paying off the large amounts of accumulated student loans than the pressure to stay the course one would believe I was on by reading my personal statement. Maybe the problem is that law students are being instructed in the ideologies of Jekyll but not instructed as to how to make this ideology economically salient on their own without the aid of some other firm or organization.
 

Why the instruction persists

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The chains of capitalism currently weigh down on the current structure of a legal institution and as a result students are being forced to help keep this structure standing. I am told if I want to make money I go to a big firm otherwise I can take a pay cut and go into another legal subfield. There needs to be a middle ground where students are trained to seek out clients who will pay them the monthly nut they require. If law schools stopped illuminating these big firms as the only alternative of getting a payday then those firm checks and grants may stop rolling in. Students are being instructed to be leaders and seek creative endeavors but at the same time heavily incentivized to put these goals on the backburner to first work under someone else in the name of currency. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide without some destructive results. A recent example of this is Nancy R. Heinen, previous Apple General Counsel, responsible backdating stock options for Steve Jobs. Heinen was working in a system that to make money you had to be someone’s employee. She was slave to her inner Hyde; she was not. We should be denouncing the system that continuous to foster this type of thinking and behavior. The legal system is incentivizing young lawyers to chase the heels of big corporations and fit into a pre-made model of what a lawyer should be rather than build their own. Though incentives are only incentives at the end of the day and not commands, it is hard to say no to a six-figure pay check when the only alternative presented in these legal institutions are ten years locked into a job in the public sector. There is no room to grow and change one’s mind as to the type of lawyer one wants to be.
 
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Students are not being trained to avoid the restrictive chains of capitalism and utilize it instead. I am told if I want to make money I go to a big firm otherwise I can take a pay cut and go into another legal subfield. Why isn’t there a middle ground and students being trained how to seek out clients who will pay them the monthly nut they require? If law schools stopped illuminating these big firms as the only alternative of getting a payday then those firm checks and grants may stop rolling in. Students are being instructed to be leaders and seek creative endeavors but at the same time are indirectly being incentivized to put these goals on the backburner to first work under someone else in the name of currency. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide without some destructive results. Can we really blame Nancy R. Heinen, previous Apple General Counsel, for backdating stock options for Steve Jobs? Heinen was working in a system that to make money you had to be someone’s employee. We should be denouncing the system that continuous to foster this thought.

Did you just ask whether we can blame lawyers for breaking the law?

I am being educated in a system that incentivizes me to chase currency before my aspirations, though unintentionally.

What is "incentivizing" you? The education or the system? And so what if you are "incentivized"? I'm sure I'm "incentivized" to make bad decisions all the time. But I don't make them anyway.

When the Hyde is sufficiently feed within us the Jekyll component becomes compromised. When a six-figure loan meets a young scholar who thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loans tends to win without sufficient guidance as to how to make this ambition profitable. Too often you hear a law school graduate talk of how they will go to a big law firm only to practice for a couple of years till their loans are paid off. Too often you hear a senior associate talk of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. Too often you hear a ex lawyer who quit the profession because the big firm life made them unhappy. This idea that one must first pass through a big law firm before pursuing ones goals is crippling the legal system.

No evidence for this statement. It may be crippling some people. But what has that to do with whether the "system" is hurt?

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When the Hyde is adequately fed the Jekyll component becomes compromised. When a six-figure loan meets a young scholar who thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loans tends to win without sufficient guidance as to how to make this ambition profitable. I had the opportunity work at a big law firm prior to law school. Too often I heard young associate talk of how they would only be in at the law firm for a couple of years till their loans are paid off. Too often I heard a senior associate talk of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. Too often I heard an ex lawyer tell of how they had to quit the profession because the firm culture made them unhappy. This idea that one must first pass through a big law firm before pursuing ones goals is having a crippling effect on the lives of many attorneys.
 

Saturation throughout the legal field

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The Hyde component travels to the public sector side of the legal field as well. Public sector lawyer stereotypically they tend to be happier creatures, but they are now keep locked in an complacent in their current positions; they must remain there for a certain amount of years for their loans to be dissolved.

Not a sentence, and not an accurate description of the relevant sociology.

They are not chasing after money to pay any pressing bills but it is easy to see that they are still nonetheless stuck in these positions. The public sector lawyers are no freer than their private counterparts. They too are not comfortable with venturing off and starting something that is new, that is theirs.

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The Hyde component permeates throughout the legal field. Many firms have now created positions labeled “contract lawyers” (http://www.crainsnewyork.com/article/20120108/SMALLBIZ/301089988). These lawyers tend to have gone to lower ranked schools or for whatever reason incapable of locating a job in a law firm. These Contract Lawyers see nothing that they can use their degrees for other than be slave to these firms in anyway possible. They were not given the skills, or perhaps the confidence, to believe they could do more with their J.D. than to conform to one of these pre-made associate models crafted by firms.
 

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Law schools and their faculty are resistant to the changing of legal education. If law students are to be instructed how to build up themselves rather than relying on others then some tenure professors will have to give up their jobs because they have nothing to offer these students. The current system feeds the innate Hyde component but it is quite possible to keep it at bay with the proper legal instruction.

What does any of this mean? You can't learn how to be a lawyer because it costs too much? Professors have to stop working so you can get a cheaper education? There should be a clear outline that we can follow through a carefully connected argument.

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Law schools and their faculty are resistant to the changing of legal education. If law students are to be instructed how to build up themselves rather than relying on others then some of the traditions of legal education have to change. Law students will have to be instructed by mentors who are actually experienced in the fields they are going to work in, not just career scholars. Law schools will have to reevaluate their prerequisite course requirements. Clinics and externships should be at the forefront of ones legal education rather than say a Torts class, where you learn nothing about modern day practicing. This though would require schools to say no to all the money firms throw at them to shuffle their students into their sweat factories. It will no doubt me an uphill battle.
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The Jekyll and Hyde Components of the Legal Profession

The training of future lawyers is made up of one prevailing force but the system in which this force rests comes with an underlying contrasting force. The prevailing force is the law school system trying to educate legal leaders who will go into the world with the proper legal morals and sense of justice to best serve their clients and the general population at large; we will refer to this as the Jekyll component. The underlying contrasting force inspired by the capitalistic law school system, the Hyde component, is the draining of these “future lawyers” of economic capital driving them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors upon graduation.

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Why spend all this verbal complexity to make the idea harder to get? Law school trains people to seek justice, but costs so much that young lawyers sell out instead to service the debt. Done in less than 25 simple words.

 

The underlying consequences of the current system

Law schools pride themselves on the idea that they are instructing Jekylls, client loving and creative individuals, to go into the world swinging the hammer of justice in the name of innocent people or organizations. In reality the system in which law schools train their students have an underlying crippling effect. The necessity to repay six figures worth of loans is feeding these innate Hyde tendencies. Graduating and having Uncle Sam knocking on their door is sending students crawling to big firms with the innocent intentions of working a couple of years and eventually pursuing the true reasons they came to law school. My guess as to why they are so many unhappy people at big firms is because they weren’t meant to be there to begin with. They are not becoming the leaders they were meant to be but rather are now sheep.

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Why the instruction persists

Students are not being trained to avoid the restrictive chains of capitalism and utilize it instead. I am told if I want to make money I go to a big firm otherwise I can take a pay cut and go into another legal subfield. Why isn’t there a middle ground and students being trained how to seek out clients who will pay them the monthly nut they require? If law schools stopped illuminating these big firms as the only alternative of getting a payday then those firm checks and grants may stop rolling in. Students are being instructed to be leaders and seek creative endeavors but at the same time are indirectly being incentivized to put these goals on the backburner to first work under someone else in the name of currency. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide without some destructive results. Can we really blame Nancy R. Heinen, previous Apple General Counsel, for backdating stock options for Steve Jobs? Heinen was working in a system that to make money you had to be someone’s employee. We should be denouncing the system that continuous to foster this thought.

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I am being educated in a system that incentivizes me to chase currency before my aspirations, though unintentionally. When the Hyde is sufficiently feed within us the Jekyll component becomes compromised. When a six-figure loan meets a young scholar who thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loans tends to win without sufficient guidance as to how to make this ambition profitable. Too often you hear a law school graduate talk of how they will go to a big law firm only to practice for a couple of years till their loans are paid off. Too often you hear a senior associate talk of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. Too often you hear a ex lawyer who quit the profession because the big firm life made them unhappy. This idea that one must first pass through a big law firm before pursuing ones goals is crippling the legal system.
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Did you just ask whether we can blame lawyers for breaking the law?

I am being educated in a system that incentivizes me to chase currency before my aspirations, though unintentionally.

What is "incentivizing" you? The education or the system? And so what if you are "incentivized"? I'm sure I'm "incentivized" to make bad decisions all the time. But I don't make them anyway.

When the Hyde is sufficiently feed within us the Jekyll component becomes compromised. When a six-figure loan meets a young scholar who thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loans tends to win without sufficient guidance as to how to make this ambition profitable. Too often you hear a law school graduate talk of how they will go to a big law firm only to practice for a couple of years till their loans are paid off. Too often you hear a senior associate talk of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. Too often you hear a ex lawyer who quit the profession because the big firm life made them unhappy. This idea that one must first pass through a big law firm before pursuing ones goals is crippling the legal system.

No evidence for this statement. It may be crippling some people. But what has that to do with whether the "system" is hurt?

 

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The Hyde component travels to the public sector side of the legal field as well. Public sector lawyer stereotypically they tend to be happier creatures, but they are now keep locked in an complacent in their current positions; they must remain there for a certain amount of years for their loans to be dissolved. They are not chasing after money to pay any pressing bills but it is easy to see that they are still nonetheless stuck in these positions. The public sector lawyers are no freer than their private counterparts. They too are not comfortable with venturing off and starting something that is new, that is theirs.
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The Hyde component travels to the public sector side of the legal field as well. Public sector lawyer stereotypically they tend to be happier creatures, but they are now keep locked in an complacent in their current positions; they must remain there for a certain amount of years for their loans to be dissolved.

Not a sentence, and not an accurate description of the relevant sociology.

They are not chasing after money to pay any pressing bills but it is easy to see that they are still nonetheless stuck in these positions. The public sector lawyers are no freer than their private counterparts. They too are not comfortable with venturing off and starting something that is new, that is theirs.

 

Conclusion

Law schools and their faculty are resistant to the changing of legal education. If law students are to be instructed how to build up themselves rather than relying on others then some tenure professors will have to give up their jobs because they have nothing to offer these students. The current system feeds the innate Hyde component but it is quite possible to keep it at bay with the proper legal instruction.

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What does any of this mean? You can't learn how to be a lawyer because it costs too much? Professors have to stop working so you can get a cheaper education? There should be a clear outline that we can follow through a carefully connected argument.

 


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The training of future lawyers is made up of the duality of two contrasting forces. The first of which is trying to educate legal scholars who will go into the world with the proper legal morals and sense of justice to best serve their clients and the general population at large; we will refer to this as the Jekyll component of the legal profession. The second component, which we will refer to as the Hyde component, is the draining of these "future lawyers" of as much economic capital as possible prior to graduation driving them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors. But is it possible for the two components to coincide as well reach their own specific goals?
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The training of future lawyers is made up of one prevailing force but the system in which this force rests comes with an underlying contrasting force. The prevailing force is the law school system trying to educate legal leaders who will go into the world with the proper legal morals and sense of justice to best serve their clients and the general population at large; we will refer to this as the Jekyll component. The underlying contrasting force inspired by the capitalistic law school system, the Hyde component, is the draining of these “future lawyers” of economic capital driving them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors upon graduation.
 
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This introduction notifies the reader that in order to read this essay as the writer intended we must grant the premise that impoverishing law students is one purpose of legal education. This is not a premise the reader is likely to grant. You are making it hard for yourself to communicate, because anyone who doesn't grant this premise is likely to stop reading. Because the premise is absurd, this is likely to deprive you of all readers.
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Law schools pride themselves on the idea that they are instructing Jekylls, client loving and creative individuals, to go into the world swinging the hammer of justice in the name of innocent people or organizations. In reality the system in which law schools train their students have an underlying crippling effect. The necessity to repay six figures worth of loans is feeding these innate Hyde tendencies. Graduating and having Uncle Sam knocking on their door is sending students crawling to big firms with the innocent intentions of working a couple of years and eventually pursuing the true reasons they came to law school. My guess as to why they are so many unhappy people at big firms is because they weren’t meant to be there to begin with. They are not becoming the leaders they were meant to be but rather are now sheep. I think back to my passionate goals of helping some weak unrepresented group in my personal statement and wonder why being canned meat doesn’t seem quite so bad, at least just for a little bit. I can help my group of choice for the time being with the simple signing of a check; perhaps one can make a reasonable argument that this of course doesn’t initiate true change. I feel more the pressures of paying off the large amounts of accumulated student loans than the pressure to stay the course one would believe I was on by reading my personal statement. Maybe the problem is that law students are being instructed in the ideologies of Jekyll but not instructed as to how to make this ideology economically salient on their own without the aid of some other firm or organization.
 
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Students are not being trained to avoid the restrictive chains of capitalism and utilize it instead. I am told if I want to make money I go to a big firm otherwise I can take a pay cut and go into another legal subfield. Why isn’t there a middle ground and students being trained how to seek out clients who will pay them the monthly nut they require? If law schools stopped illuminating these big firms as the only alternative of getting a payday then those firm checks and grants may stop rolling in. Students are being instructed to be leaders and seek creative endeavors but at the same time are indirectly being incentivized to put these goals on the backburner to first work under someone else in the name of currency. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide without some destructive results. Can we really blame Nancy R. Heinen, previous Apple General Counsel, for backdating stock options for Steve Jobs? Heinen was working in a system that to make money you had to be someone’s employee. We should be denouncing the system that continuous to foster this thought. I am being educated in a system that incentivizes me to chase currency before my aspirations, though unintentionally. When the Hyde is sufficiently feed within us the Jekyll component becomes compromised. When a six-figure loan meets a young scholar who thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loans tends to win without sufficient guidance as to how to make this ambition profitable. Too often you hear a law school graduate talk of how they will go to a big law firm only to practice for a couple of years till their loans are paid off. Too often you hear a senior associate talk of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. Too often you hear a ex lawyer who quit the profession because the big firm life made them unhappy. This idea that one must first pass through a big law firm before pursuing ones goals is crippling the legal system.
 
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Law schools pride themselves on thinking that they are instructing Jekylls, passionate and client loving individuals, to go into the world. In reality they are sending Hydes, selfish, money hungry individuals, into society to fix our nation's legal issues.
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I think back to my personal statement and wonder how it was possible for me to have been so quickly derailed from my passionate goals or helping some weak unrepresented group. Now perhaps being canned meat does not seem quite so bad, at least just for a little bit. I can help my group of choice for the time being with the simple signing of a check.
 
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Nonsense. If you earn an associate's salary at a big firm you will be able to make tiny charitable contributions that affect nothing. Your "group of choice" will be lucky to buy a cup of coffee with the charitable contributions you can afford after paying your taxes, loan payments, and living expenses out of $160k, even if you get such a job. Do the math. This is a favorite excuse of law students, but it is bilge.

Have I given up on who I am and what I stand for? Have I lost sight of my personal goal and only seeking economic ones now? I feel more the pressures of paying off the large amounts in student loans I have accumulated than the pressure to stay the course one would believe I was on by reading my personal statement.

But that's because you have assumed that paying your loans off is an enormous problem, which it will not be if you build a canny practice. The trick to having your economic security and your social goals is to stop treating them as opposed objectives. You need a strategy to attain both, which you can make during law school if you don't take your eye off the ball.

Law institutions cannot expect law students to graduate and go rain justice and legal morality on society when their movements are being restricted by the chains of capitalism.

Why not? Capitalism is a source of injustice, but it is also a source of wealth if you can tap it. Capitalism's alternatives would not eliminate injustice; they would change its form. If you can figure out how to use the wealth concentrated by capitalism to attack capitalism's injustices, you can "rain" justice on your society using capitalism's water. I do, so why can't you?

As a law student I do not feel as if I am being taught to be the best lawyer I can be. I do not even feel as if I have the ability to direct the path of my legal career. Can I really go and start a practice and feel comfortable that I would be able to pay back six figures worth of loans before the creditors come banging on my door

Why not? Almost everyone you know has a six-figure mortgage and most of them pay it. Your practice has a monthly nut, which includes your loan repayment, and it must have a book producing an income sufficient to meet the nut. Do the arithmetic, figure out what your clients must pay you each month in order to make your nut, and confidently expect to be able to find the clients who will pay what you require.

Those are the questions currently on my mind rather than how best can I serve a future client. Law students are being told that they should uphold a sense of legal morality and justice but at the same time are indirectly being taught that all that matters at the end of the day is their ability to amass a large amount of money in a short amount of time. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide with some destructive results. Can we really blame Wendy Howell for backdating stock options for Steve Jobs?

The Apple General Counsel who backdated the options was Nancy R. Heinen. Why shouldn't we be able to blame her? If she knowingly broke the law in order to steal money for a client, what excuse can you offer for her? That the King of the Undead, now dead, was prepared to sacrifice her career and her license in order to prevent his own punishment is a reason to condemn him, one among very many, but not an excuse for her.

Would we all be as admirable as Robinson from Lawyerland?

Perhaps Robinson is admirable, but he is hardly as admirable as all that.

Why it is happening

I am being educated to be a money hungry behemoth.

I doubt that completely. You're no behemoth, you're a calf, and you will be for quite some time. Your money-hunger doesn't come from us; if you have it, you brought it with you. You're being offered help to become anything you want. But law school is an imagination test: you must imagine what you want to be in order to become what you imagine. So far, you are not succeeding in the imagination test.

Passion will always overcome reason when the passion has sufficiently heated the blood and our inner Hyde comes out.

Who says? I don't think either reason or passion are the relevant springs of human conduct.

When a six-figure loan meets a bright-eyed young scholar who once thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loan tend to win out.

But as I have pointed out, there isn't any inherent conflict; you just made that up.

The inherent problems of the second component of the legal profession have become more prevalent in our now weak economy. With the scarcity of jobs in the public sector and government many who even wanted non private sector jobs cannot find them.

This sentence is confusing. What is it supposed to mean?

All too often you hear a soon to be law school graduate tell the tale of how he or she will go to a big law firm only to practice for a couple of years till their loans are paid off.

What has this to do with the "bad economy"? I've been hearing that nonsense from law students, "good" economy and "bad" for a quarter-century.

All too often you hear a senior associate tell the tale of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the money and the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. All too often you hear a used to be lawyer who quit the profession of law all together because they did not enjoy the life they lived while at a big law firm. The legal profession has become one best titled "Big Law or Bust".

Nonsense. Almost all the lawyers who exist never had that "Big Law" chance, and it hasn't busted them. This is just lint you've stuffed your ears with, to avoid listening to the sound of your own heartbeat.

Problem reaches farther than expected

One could argue, but wait if I do manage to get into the public sector my loans will be paid off after a number of years have elapsed. But even a lawyer who goes into government or the public sector still drags along a heavy ball labeled "capitalism." Stereotypically they tend to be happier creatures, whose inner Hydes are kept at bay by possibility of their loans being graciously lifted of their heads by some higher being.

What? This doesn't make any sense to me.

They are not chasing after money to pay any pressing bills but it is easy to see that they are still nonetheless stuck in these positions. If these individuals were to wake up one day and think that their true calling was working at an investment bank and leave the public sector, they would quickly realize the federal government is unforgiving when it comes to bills owed.

What? I don't understand this point either. The whole graf needs rewriting for clarity, at least.

Conclusion

The desire to want to practice in Big Law is not a characteristic that should be looked down upon by anyone.

Why not? It's an exceedingly poor way to live a lawyer's life, and it's small return on society's investment in the young person who chooses that path.

This paper is merely to attest to the fact that the law school system is directing the majority of its students towards Big Law.

Not the "law school system." Not even all of this law school. You can't blame others for your own choices.

It simply is not for everyone. Everyone will not find happiness in that area of law. The current legal system is creating more unhappy lawyers that find themselves practicing in areas they lack interest in.

This is not the conclusion to the preceding argument.

This is a good bad first draft. Now that you've gotten the rhetoric of impossibility off your chest, expressing your fear completely, the next draft, which will look very different, can address the real questions:

  1. What do I want to achieve in society through my lawyering?
  2. Who are the clients I will help?
  3. How much will it cost and who will pay?

Sometimes it is the clients who will pay, sometimes someone else. Strategy is about matching resources to objectives. What you want to be taught is how to strategize. People here can teach you, but only if you are making the effort to learn. The current draft expresses resistance to learning: it's too hard, capitalism is at fault, there aren't enough government jobs, greed is good, etc. These are all excuses, covers for anxiety about the job you've set out to do. But if you are prepared to tolerate injustice in return for personal comfort, there are easier ways to sell your soul than by going to law school.

 

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The Jekyll and Hyde Components of the Legal Profession I. Intro The training of future lawyers is made up of the duality of two contrasting forces. The first of which is trying to educate legal scholars who will go into the world with the proper legal morals and sense of justice to best serve their clients and the general population at large; we will refer to this as the Jekyll component of the legal profession. The second component, which we will refer to as the Hyde component, is the draining of these “future lawyers” of as much economic capital as possible prior to graduation driving them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors. But is it possible for the two components to coincide as well reach their own specific goals? II. What is the problem? Law schools pride themselves on thinking that they are instructing Jekylls, passionate and client loving individuals, to go into the world. In reality they are sending Hydes, selfish, money hungry individuals, into society to fix our nation’s legal issues. I think back to my personal statement and wonder how it was possible for me to have been so quickly derailed from my passionate goals or helping some weak unrepresented group. Now perhaps being canned meat does not seem quite so bad, at least just for a little bit. I can help my group of choice for the time being with the simple signing of a check. Have I given up on who I am and what I stand for? Have I lost sight of my personal goal and only seeking economic ones now? I feel more the pressures of paying off the large amounts in student loans I have accumulated than the pressure to stay the course one would believe I was on by reading my personal statement.

  1. Subsection- Law institutions cannot expect law students to graduate and go rain justice and legal morality on society when their movements are being restricted by the chains of capitalism. As a law student I do not feel as if I am being taught to be the best lawyer I can be. I do not even feel as if I have the ability to direct the path of my legal career. Can I really go and start a practice and feel comfortable that I would be able to pay back six figures worth of loans before the creditors come banging on my door? Those are the questions currently on my mind rather than how best can I serve a future client. Law students are being told that they should uphold a sense of legal morality and justice but at the same time are indirectly being taught that all that matters at the end of the day is their ability to amass a large amount of money in a short amount of time. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide with some destructive results. Can we really blame Wendy Howell for backdating stock options for Steve Jobs? Would we all be as admirable as Robinson from Lawyerland?
III. Why it is happening I am being educated to be a money hungry behemoth. Passion will always overcome reason when the passion has sufficiently heated the blood and our inner Hyde comes out. When a six-figure loan meets a bright-eyed young scholar who once thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loan tend to win out. The inherent problems of the second component of the legal profession have become more prevalent in our now weak economy. With the scarcity of jobs in the public sector and government many who even wanted non private sector jobs cannot find them. All too often you hear a soon to be law school graduate tell the tale of how he or she will go to a big law firm only to practice for a couple of years till their loans are paid off. All too often you hear a senior associate tell the tale of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the money and the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. All too often you hear a used to be lawyer who quit the profession of law all together because they did not enjoy the life they lived while at a big law firm. The legal profession has become one best titled “Big Law or Bust”. IV. Problem reaches farther than expected One could argue, but wait if I do manage to get into the public sector my loans will be paid off after a number of years have elapsed. But even a lawyer who goes into government or the public sector still drags along a heavy ball labeled “capitalism.” Stereotypically they tend to be happier creatures, whose inner Hydes are kept at bay by possibility of their loans being graciously lifted of their heads by some higher being. They are not chasing after money to pay any pressing bills but it is easy to see that they are still nonetheless stuck in these positions. If these individuals were to wake up one day and think that their true calling was working at an investment bank and leave the public sector, they would quickly realize the federal government is unforgiving when it comes to bills owed. V. Conclusion The desire to want to practice in Big Law is not a characteristic that should be looked down upon by anyone. This paper is merely to attest to the fact that the law school system is directing the majority of its students towards Big Law. It simply is not for everyone. Everyone will not find happiness in that area of law. The current legal system is creating more unhappy lawyers that find themselves practicing in areas they lack interest in.
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This introduction notifies the reader that in order to read this essay as the writer intended we must grant the premise that impoverishing law students is one purpose of legal education. This is not a premise the reader is likely to grant. You are making it hard for yourself to communicate, because anyone who doesn't grant this premise is likely to stop reading. Because the premise is absurd, this is likely to deprive you of all readers.

What is the problem?

Law schools pride themselves on thinking that they are instructing Jekylls, passionate and client loving individuals, to go into the world. In reality they are sending Hydes, selfish, money hungry individuals, into society to fix our nation's legal issues.

Neither one is true. Because law students are a mix of individuals with different characters and temperaments. Why establish a definition of the subject which the knowing reader will be aware from the beginning isn't true?

I think back to my personal statement and wonder how it was possible for me to have been so quickly derailed from my passionate goals or helping some weak unrepresented group. Now perhaps being canned meat does not seem quite so bad, at least just for a little bit. I can help my group of choice for the time being with the simple signing of a check.

Nonsense. If you earn an associate's salary at a big firm you will be able to make tiny charitable contributions that affect nothing. Your "group of choice" will be lucky to buy a cup of coffee with the charitable contributions you can afford after paying your taxes, loan payments, and living expenses out of $160k, even if you get such a job. Do the math. This is a favorite excuse of law students, but it is bilge.

Have I given up on who I am and what I stand for? Have I lost sight of my personal goal and only seeking economic ones now? I feel more the pressures of paying off the large amounts in student loans I have accumulated than the pressure to stay the course one would believe I was on by reading my personal statement.

But that's because you have assumed that paying your loans off is an enormous problem, which it will not be if you build a canny practice. The trick to having your economic security and your social goals is to stop treating them as opposed objectives. You need a strategy to attain both, which you can make during law school if you don't take your eye off the ball.

Law institutions cannot expect law students to graduate and go rain justice and legal morality on society when their movements are being restricted by the chains of capitalism.

Why not? Capitalism is a source of injustice, but it is also a source of wealth if you can tap it. Capitalism's alternatives would not eliminate injustice; they would change its form. If you can figure out how to use the wealth concentrated by capitalism to attack capitalism's injustices, you can "rain" justice on your society using capitalism's water. I do, so why can't you?

As a law student I do not feel as if I am being taught to be the best lawyer I can be. I do not even feel as if I have the ability to direct the path of my legal career. Can I really go and start a practice and feel comfortable that I would be able to pay back six figures worth of loans before the creditors come banging on my door

Why not? Almost everyone you know has a six-figure mortgage and most of them pay it. Your practice has a monthly nut, which includes your loan repayment, and it must have a book producing an income sufficient to meet the nut. Do the arithmetic, figure out what your clients must pay you each month in order to make your nut, and confidently expect to be able to find the clients who will pay what you require.

Those are the questions currently on my mind rather than how best can I serve a future client. Law students are being told that they should uphold a sense of legal morality and justice but at the same time are indirectly being taught that all that matters at the end of the day is their ability to amass a large amount of money in a short amount of time. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide with some destructive results. Can we really blame Wendy Howell for backdating stock options for Steve Jobs?

The Apple General Counsel who backdated the options was Nancy R. Heinen. Why shouldn't we be able to blame her? If she knowingly broke the law in order to steal money for a client, what excuse can you offer for her? That the King of the Undead, now dead, was prepared to sacrifice her career and her license in order to prevent his own punishment is a reason to condemn him, one among very many, but not an excuse for her.

Would we all be as admirable as Robinson from Lawyerland?

Perhaps Robinson is admirable, but he is hardly as admirable as all that.

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All too often you hear a senior associate tell the tale of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the money and the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. All too often you hear a used to be lawyer who quit the profession of law all together because they did not enjoy the life they lived while at a big law firm. The legal profession has become one best titled "Big Law or Bust".

Nonsense. Almost all the lawyers who exist never had that "Big Law" chance, and it hasn't busted them. This is just lint you've stuffed your ears with, to avoid listening to the sound of your own heartbeat.

Problem reaches farther than expected

One could argue, but wait if I do manage to get into the public sector my loans will be paid off after a number of years have elapsed. But even a lawyer who goes into government or the public sector still drags along a heavy ball labeled "capitalism." Stereotypically they tend to be happier creatures, whose inner Hydes are kept at bay by possibility of their loans being graciously lifted of their heads by some higher being.

What? This doesn't make any sense to me.

They are not chasing after money to pay any pressing bills but it is easy to see that they are still nonetheless stuck in these positions. If these individuals were to wake up one day and think that their true calling was working at an investment bank and leave the public sector, they would quickly realize the federal government is unforgiving when it comes to bills owed.

What? I don't understand this point either. The whole graf needs rewriting for clarity, at least.

Conclusion

The desire to want to practice in Big Law is not a characteristic that should be looked down upon by anyone.

Why not? It's an exceedingly poor way to live a lawyer's life, and it's small return on society's investment in the young person who chooses that path.

This paper is merely to attest to the fact that the law school system is directing the majority of its students towards Big Law.

Not the "law school system." Not even all of this law school. You can't blame others for your own choices.

It simply is not for everyone. Everyone will not find happiness in that area of law. The current legal system is creating more unhappy lawyers that find themselves practicing in areas they lack interest in.

This is not the conclusion to the preceding argument.

This is a good bad first draft. Now that you've gotten the rhetoric of impossibility off your chest, expressing your fear completely, the next draft, which will look very different, can address the real questions:

  1. What do I want to achieve in society through my lawyering?
  2. Who are the clients I will help?
  3. How much will it cost and who will pay?

Sometimes it is the clients who will pay, sometimes someone else. Strategy is about matching resources to objectives. What you want to be taught is how to strategize. People here can teach you, but only if you are making the effort to learn. The current draft expresses resistance to learning: it's too hard, capitalism is at fault, there aren't enough government jobs, greed is good, etc. These are all excuses, covers for anxiety about the job you've set out to do. But if you are prepared to tolerate injustice in return for personal comfort, there are easier ways to sell your soul than by going to law school.

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The Jekyll and Hyde Components of the Legal Profession I. Intro The training of future lawyers is made up of the duality of two contrasting forces. The first of which is trying to educate legal scholars who will go into the world with the proper legal morals and sense of justice to best serve their clients and the general population at large; we will refer to this as the Jekyll component of the legal profession. The second component, which we will refer to as the Hyde component, is the draining of these “future lawyers” of as much economic capital as possible prior to graduation driving them to seek mainly capitalistic endeavors. But is it possible for the two components to coincide as well reach their own specific goals? II. What is the problem? Law schools pride themselves on thinking that they are instructing Jekylls, passionate and client loving individuals, to go into the world. In reality they are sending Hydes, selfish, money hungry individuals, into society to fix our nation’s legal issues. I think back to my personal statement and wonder how it was possible for me to have been so quickly derailed from my passionate goals or helping some weak unrepresented group. Now perhaps being canned meat does not seem quite so bad, at least just for a little bit. I can help my group of choice for the time being with the simple signing of a check. Have I given up on who I am and what I stand for? Have I lost sight of my personal goal and only seeking economic ones now? I feel more the pressures of paying off the large amounts in student loans I have accumulated than the pressure to stay the course one would believe I was on by reading my personal statement.

  1. Subsection- Law institutions cannot expect law students to graduate and go rain justice and legal morality on society when their movements are being restricted by the chains of capitalism. As a law student I do not feel as if I am being taught to be the best lawyer I can be. I do not even feel as if I have the ability to direct the path of my legal career. Can I really go and start a practice and feel comfortable that I would be able to pay back six figures worth of loans before the creditors come banging on my door? Those are the questions currently on my mind rather than how best can I serve a future client. Law students are being told that they should uphold a sense of legal morality and justice but at the same time are indirectly being taught that all that matters at the end of the day is their ability to amass a large amount of money in a short amount of time. As the story of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde illustrate, the two cannot coincide with some destructive results. Can we really blame Wendy Howell for backdating stock options for Steve Jobs? Would we all be as admirable as Robinson from Lawyerland?
III. Why it is happening I am being educated to be a money hungry behemoth. Passion will always overcome reason when the passion has sufficiently heated the blood and our inner Hyde comes out. When a six-figure loan meets a bright-eyed young scholar who once thought they would use their law degree to save some unrepresented neighborhood or population, unfortunately the loan tend to win out. The inherent problems of the second component of the legal profession have become more prevalent in our now weak economy. With the scarcity of jobs in the public sector and government many who even wanted non private sector jobs cannot find them. All too often you hear a soon to be law school graduate tell the tale of how he or she will go to a big law firm only to practice for a couple of years till their loans are paid off. All too often you hear a senior associate tell the tale of how they planned on practicing for just a couple of years but it was too hard to walk away from the money and the lifestyle they were accustomed to living. All too often you hear a used to be lawyer who quit the profession of law all together because they did not enjoy the life they lived while at a big law firm. The legal profession has become one best titled “Big Law or Bust”. IV. Problem reaches farther than expected One could argue, but wait if I do manage to get into the public sector my loans will be paid off after a number of years have elapsed. But even a lawyer who goes into government or the public sector still drags along a heavy ball labeled “capitalism.” Stereotypically they tend to be happier creatures, whose inner Hydes are kept at bay by possibility of their loans being graciously lifted of their heads by some higher being. They are not chasing after money to pay any pressing bills but it is easy to see that they are still nonetheless stuck in these positions. If these individuals were to wake up one day and think that their true calling was working at an investment bank and leave the public sector, they would quickly realize the federal government is unforgiving when it comes to bills owed. V. Conclusion The desire to want to practice in Big Law is not a characteristic that should be looked down upon by anyone. This paper is merely to attest to the fact that the law school system is directing the majority of its students towards Big Law. It simply is not for everyone. Everyone will not find happiness in that area of law. The current legal system is creating more unhappy lawyers that find themselves practicing in areas they lack interest in.

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