Law in the Internet Society

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MayaWakamatsuFirstEssay 3 - 06 Dec 2021 - Main.EbenMoglen
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Issues on Obtaining Users’ Consent to Privacy Policies

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 I believe that there are some problems on obtaining consent to privacy policies, and we should set regulations or standards to socially regulate on collecting and surveilling our personal information.
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The best route to improvement is to locate the idea of your own that goes beyond what we discussed in class, and to make that the center of the essay. Most of what is contained in the present draft summarizes the discussion of the inadequacy of consent from class. Making clearer what you yourself are adding to the conversation will produce a much more effective second draft.

 
You are entitled to restrict access to your paper if you want to. But we all derive immense benefit from reading one another's work, and I hope you won't feel the need unless the subject matter is personal and its disclosure would be harmful or undesirable. To restrict access to your paper simply delete the "#" character on the next two lines:

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