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 Thanks for your comments. I think the two of you are right that the way I introduce this topic leaves a bit to be desired, and that a more focused approach would be useful to the reader. Dana - the part about listening to music at home is there to try demonstrate briefly how valuable I find writings and music. I put it in to try to build agreement with skeptical readers. I am going to explore other ways of achieving this, so I would appreciate your comments on my next revision once I've finished it.
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>		Brett - in terms of the incentive to create and control of the work those statements are included to introduce the topic. I don't think that I can draw them out more fully in this space and still make the point that I want to make. I know that Bradley Mullins is looking at alternatives. And others exist such as merchandising or patronage. When I revise the introduction I will keep in mind that I don't want to lead the reader down the wrong path.
 -- JustinColannino - 23 Nov 2009
 
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