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A proposal to live in a free mobile telecommunications world

-- By DiegodelaPuente - 29 Sep 2011

1. Open your mind

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<		By the end of 2010 there were approximately 5.3 billion mobile subscribers according to the International Telecommunication Union. This reflects that mobile network owners have an immense control and power over the life of millions who must submit to their wills and rules. Therefore, I argue that the actual scheme must be changed in society's favor and that technology advances are the way to achieve it. Unfortunately, mobile network operators and the U.S. government have opposed any change to the actual scheme through the years.
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>		By the end of 2010 there were approximately 5.3 billion mobile subscribers according to the International Telecommunication Union. This reflects that mobile network owners have an immense control and power over the life of millions who must submit to their wills and rules. Therefore, I argue that the actual scheme must be changed in society's favor and that technology advances are the way to achieve it. Unfortunately, mobile network operators and the U.S. government have opposed any change to the actual scheme through the years.
 
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Why does the link have to be standing apart, as though it weren't a link? How about what I've done above? Doesn't that make it easier to read, without the flow-disruption of the URL? Writing for the web is actually natural, and you should do it. Instead you first produce a reference list that requires the reader to scroll up and down like a madman to follow your references, and then create visual blockage by putting URLs in the text. A moment's effort gives you text that's clean, simple, and informative. Hypertext is better text. You need the exercise of finishing the transformation.
 
Nowadays, the most used technology to perform phone calls by advanced mobile operators and phone service providers over the Internet, such as Skype, is Voice over IP (VoIP? ), also called Internet Telephony, which transforms voice into data packets that travel through the Internet to its destination. Given this, it is technically possible that we do not need mobile network operators to process our phone calls if we can be connected to a giant Wi-Fi network and have Wi-Fi enabled mobile devices.
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It seems to me that you veer off course here, at the end, by opening a new subject at the moment that your outline should have called for a conclusion in line with the rest of the essay.
 

Information sources

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Please do get rid of this. If there are links that should be made, they should have a place to be linked from the text.
 VoIP technology

- http://transition.fcc.gov/voip/


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