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 However, the paper kind of made me want to submit myself to Facebook (or whoever else can divine my digital dreams). I want to know what my subconscious wishes are! I want to have my hidden dreams fulfilled! It doesn't sound so bad to me :). People spend tens of thousands of dollars to try reach the nether recesses of their mind through psychoanalysis...

-- GavinSnyder - 03 Dec 2009

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Dana,

This is a great essay. I've looked at your paper now a few times but still I have no substantive edits. I did find the final paragraph to be suddenly faster-moving than the rest of the essay, and thus somewhat harder to follow. But that is minor at most.

I agree with Gavin, the style of the writing, this approach, is refreshing. I am inspired to try something similar in my next paper. Very nicely done.

-- BrianS - 03 Dec 2009

 
 
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