| Dear Professor Moglen,
I am writing this letter because I think you provide a vital voice to the Columbia Law School community, and because the time you devote to students in office hours and the work you do on the wiki is more than commendable and should be more common. However, though you are one of the most engaging and dedicated professors I have encountered at CLS thus far, its not all just peachy. | | But maybe Eben isn't trying to walk us down a path. Take the same example as above. There was something genuinely frustrating about not getting the answers we were looking for. Satisfaction has a way of ebbing in a way that frustration doesn't, and maybe that's the point; not only are you not going to get the answer you're looking for, you're not even going to get the argument you're looking for. That means you're going to be annoyed. You're going to be mulling it over for the next two days. And you're going to figure out why you actually disagree with the extreme viewpoint being presented in class. Personally, I don't think this is more effective than a back and forth discussion, but I'm just trying to explore possible explanations for why this method may be desirable. | |
< < | To build on Jessica's point, this class has engendered participation in ways that none of my other classes have. Shortly after we turned in our first papers, I was at a birthday party on the Lower East Side with several other students from our L&CS class. For a few of us, the major topic of discussion that night was what we had each chosen to write about for Eben's class and why. Even at the time, we took notice of the fact that we were actually excited to talk about a law school class on a Friday night. Perhaps there is an argument that the fear of insulting red text inspired us to think about these papers in ways we otherwise wouldn't have. I certainly was excited to talk about my paper, although that apparently didn't help me avoid a ton of red text. (On the upside, I learned what 'jejune' means.) | > > | To build on Jessica's point, this class has engendered participation in ways that none of my other classes have. Shortly after we turned in our first papers, I was at a birthday party on the Lower East Side with several other students from our L&CS class. For a few of us, the major topic of discussion that night was what we had each chosen to write about for Eben's class and why. Even at the tiume, we took notice of the fact that we were actually excited to talk about a law school class on a Friday night. Perhaps there is an argument that the fear of insulting red text inspired us to think about these papers in ways we otherwise wouldn't have. I certainly was excited to talk about my paper, although that apparently didn't help me avoid a ton of red text. (On the upside, I learned what 'jejune' means.) | | -- DanKarmel - 08 Apr 2010 | |
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I think we can best discuss all this material, which is very
interesting even to me, if we separate some of the pieces.
First, although Art's initial posting may give a different
impression, he isn't actually saying that I called some student,
himself or anyone else, "stupid" or "a moron" in class. I don't run
a recording device in this class all the time, as I do in my other
classrooms for other reasons, so we don't have tape to prove the
negative, but although class is a theatrical performance and I use
all the registers available to performers, that would be censurable
conduct falling outside the rules I play by. Art is angry at me, and
certainly feels, perhaps justifiedly, that I've been unnecessarily
hard on him in a private conversation—which being private I
wouldn't talk about here except that he's brought it up—but
Tuesday's class conversation, as Joshua Hochman noted, was until its
last quick exchange, not personally about Art at all. He has
criticisms to level that I want to respond to, but I think we should
be able to take off the agenda the most inflammatory charge he seemed
to make, but wasn't as far as I can tell actually making, and which
would not be justified. The particular phrase "lazy and stupid" was
applied, as people will remember, to law professors at Columbia Law
School, not to students, and whatever else may be true about my
colleagues, they can take care of themselves.
Nona, on the other hand, is specifically criticizing my class "name
calling" with respect to non-students, particularly corporate
entities that own cultural or intellectual property, and the
oppressors of law students both in academia and in firms. Her
criticism is that those portions of my performances make her cringe,
and are, as she puts it "blunt[ing] the impact of his teachings and
thus, his fight for freedom."
Dan Karmel speaks for many in raising two other criticisms, that I am
sometimes dismissive of student arguments in class, and that I am
"insulting" in comments on written work.
All of these criticisms are seriously-intended, useful to me as well
as to the people making them, and deserve considered response.
I want to begin with Dan's two points, and I want to begin there
because I addressed them, prospectively, at our first class meeting.
I said then, as you remember, that people were going to get cross
with me for cutting off student arguments, or for being dismissive,
and for being hot rather than sweet in commentary on written work. I
explained then that from my point of view, these feelings, which I
recognized would be strongly felt, come from conflict with a basic
necessity on my side. Editing, I said then, is a job that cannot be
done with primary or even secondary concern for the personal
sensitivities of the author. The only way it can be done, I said, is
with a degree of candor that will always be, and will much of the
time feel like, brutal honesty. I told a story on that first day
about an old friend of mine, a former criminal defense attorney in
private practice, who has been a professional journalist for more
than a decade now. I said that he recently described himself to me
as a sexual assault survivor after completing an edit with the very
professional and accomplished editor at the famous magazine where
they are both on staff. I said that the very nature of his immensely
exaggerated metaphor showed just how complex and fraught the nature
of the editorial relationship is. I warned that I was acting as an
editor of our class conversation as well as all the writing here,
that there would be moments of hurt feelings, which as a human being
I genuinely regret causing, but that I would nonetheless do the job
in the only way I believe it can really be done.
So here we are. Nona has referred before to my "scary red type," and
although she tries to be as appreciative as possible of my efforts,
she, like Dan, shows here serious signs of wishing I were different
in precisely the way I warned in advance I would sometimes annoyingly
refuse to be.
One of the reasons I work the way I do, in this and all my other
classes, is that I am fully, publicly accountable to the whole class
for every comment I make on all the work done by all the students who
work with me. Whether my editorial interventions are "scary" or
"insulting," whether they are fair comment too bluntly or just
bluntly enough phrased, whether they are productive or useless in
helping people to write better—each reader here has access to all
the information and can judge. I wish all teachers worked this way.
That they don't is—allow me to amplify my earlier
comment—lazy, cowardly, and stupid.
I am no different from those who criticize me in this respect: I have
always found being aggressively edited an uncomfortable and
ego-bruising experience. But except when it was conducted by inept
editors, as it sometimes was, I always found it in retrospect, when
my temper had cooled, a valuable experience that improved my use of
language. Whether I am skillful or inept is in the end for each of
you to judge. Experience suggests to me that you should expect your
eventual judgment to differ from the view you take in the heat of
the moment, when the web page on which I have been bleeding red ink
is yours.
Nona's criticism points in two other important directions. First, let
me state simply that the reason I talk with disdain and contempt for
the forces of wealth and power in this exceedingly unjust society is
to remind you as often as I can that this is precisely the lawyer's
job. Our task, in Mark Twain's phrase, is to comfort the afflicted
and afflict the comfortable. You are subjected every day to various
forms of propaganda—from teachers, placement workers, and
colleagues, among others—telling you that your real interest
lies in propritiating power—in order to get a grade, an interview, a
job, a client, a fortune, or a sinecure. If you come to believe this
corrupting nonsense, society will in the end be worse rather than
better for your presence in it.
Second, I don't want this class to be part of my fight for freedom: I
don't think I have any business making this class about my work.
We don't read here what I write, we don't talk in any depth about the
substantive issues on which I work. And although I consider myself to
have had some creative legal ideas, I don't use them as fodder here.
Art says "If you have a real problem with these companies and
practices, a real interest in your students, their pursuit of
'justice,' and possess knowledge that we don't, then do your
job. Teach us." I am teaching two other courses this year that have
precisely that purpose, and in your third year, when I get back, I
will be teaching them again. Those courses too have wikis, and in
those almost every word of what I say is recorded and transcribed;
you are free to listen, read, and learn as much as you like. Here
however, at this stage in your passage through law school, I am
teaching something else, with which I believe that would more or less
completely interfere. Accordingly, Art says, "I have come to the
conclusion, that in fact you do not oppose these things you decry
based on principle." But his conclusion is based on what I haven't
talked about; even the "neutral point of view" taken by the Wikipedia
advances the opposite interpretation. I think, in short, that Art is
jumping to a conclusion, which is a habit I have called to his
attention, as you know.
Which brings us at last back to Art's original "Open Letter," which
kicked off the present conversation. Those who have no experience
with the Cult of Mac will perhaps be surprised that in a document so
full of hurt and personal anger there would be so much discussion
based upon, and so much quotation from, Apple Corporation press
releases. On Tuesday, as you recall, we were discussing Thorstein
Veblen, who has been dead for seventy years, but who—unlike
many famous dead people—has never been appropropriated for an
appearance in an Apple advertisement. This is not because Thorstein
Veblen didn't "think different." As I pointed out on Tuesday, Apple
products are perfect examples of Veblen's theme of the superseding
economic value of waste. They are glitzy, overpriced,
underfunctional, coercive artifacts designed to appeal to the
personal image snobbery of non-technical, creative people, breathing
not just indifference but elevated levels of contempt for the very
folks who pay way too much to buy them. Apple is a cargo cult; it
makes hyperexpensive shiny things designed to ensnare consumers in a
system that is technically and psychologically difficult to escape,
but which integrates so completely with the self-image of the
consumer that it creates organizational loyalty making it possible
to sell cult members a lifetime supply of wallet-busting schlock with
total predictability.
As those who were there will recall, Art asked me, rather pointedly,
to give an example of what Apple could do differently. In response,
I described the design and function of the display of the
OLPC—technology invented by Mary Lou Jepsen—whose
properties emerge from a culture of respect for the users of the
device (specifically children), and which achieves fundamental
innovation in performance, safety, power-consumption and
maintainability as a consequence. When I finished this somewhat
tedious technical example, Art asked me, again aggressively, what I
took from it. I said, "that you don't know everything." He
considers that belittlement, and is plainly very mad about it. I
thought it was fair comment then, and I do now. I think it is patent
that I wasn't calling him stupid, or even ignorant. I was telling
him that there's more in the world than he knows about, and that he
jumps often to conclusions on the basis of one-sided or incomplete
evidence.
In the office hours conversation Art mentions, he did indeed ask me
to explain to him more about privacy law. I didn't say, "I teach
some courses on the subject, and you could take them." I did,
however, say nothing to him that can't be found on those course
wikis. Among those things, I said, "If you care about privacy on the
Net and technological freedom, and you use Steve Jobs' stuff, you're
a moron." As students in my other courses will tell you, and as you
can hear yourself if you care to listen to the endless tedious
recordings on the wikis, this was not a personal comment aimed at
him, though he takes it that way. His resistance then was as
concerted as it is now, and although he exaggerates in saying that it
consumed 45 minutes—because the whole conversation was shorter
than half an hour—his determination does indicate how
successfully Apple has caused him to increase perilously his ego
investment in his consumption.
The sacrifices of freedom and privacy necessary in order to live in
Jobsville may well be worth paying for some individuals; I have no
problem with that. I would never tell Art or anyone else what
computer to use or what to run on it. What I told him then, and
what he apparently bitterly resents, is that if someone can't see
those sacrifices, I have nothing to teach him about privacy and the
Net.
(A digression: When we made SFLC, my Legal Director, Dan Ravicher,
decreed as a rule of recruiting that we automatically discard any job
application containing a resume in Microsoft Word's .doc format.
Anyone doing that despite our published instructions, Dan reasoned,
surely was of no professional interest as a trainee or colleague. I
was skeptical at first, but it has turned out to be an excellent
decision.)
With those who believe my teaching could be better, I am in vehement
agreement. I have been teaching for a quarter-century now, and I can
count on the fingers of one hand the individual classes in which I
fully lived up to my own intentions. There has been none this term.
I think it is much easier to be a great lawyer than a very good
teacher. It may be worth remembering once again that teaching is a
performing art, in which the actor ought not be either completely
conflated with or utterly separated from the role. You will have
noticed that we meet in an amphitheater, that there is an overture,
and often an interlude. Mike's concurrence sums up a frustrating
truth, that who we "are" as teachers is never exactly who we are.
One last thing should be said. I am impressed and pleased that all
of those who have criticized my conduct, sometimes with as much
brutal honesty as I could have wished, have shown no doubt that their
courage in speaking would be fairly received. I hope that Nona was
wrong in saying that people are reluctant to criticize my conduct of
this course because I am grading it. I am glad, at any rate, that
neither she nor Art shows the slightest concern. That's as it should
be.
People here, even the ones who are mad at me at the moment, have
probably realized that I don't do this work out of love of law
school, or a desire to be liked by law professors, or in hopes of
being appointed to something, or in order to buy stuff for my family.
I do it out of commitment to and admiration for young people who are
capable, through talent, hard work and sheer luck, of growing up to
change the world. I'm trying to help you crack the shell of the egg
that has your future self inside it. But sometimes you can't break
eggs without making an omelette. To those on whom I've been too
hard, including Art, I apologize. To those who wish I'd stop
trash-talking about the owners of everything, okay I will. Someone
else will have to pick up the task of voicing Thorstein Veblen then,
of course. But yes, you can.
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