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I know this is a lot to ask, but does anyone out there feel like doing a rewrite on this paper so I can do my rewrite? -- DanKarmel - 22 Jun 2010

Mark, See if you can work with this version. I left your comments since I don't know if you've read my responses yet. -- DanKarmel - 10 Jun 2010

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Link fixed. -- MatthewZorn - 24 Jun 2010

 

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<		*Why exactly did home prices depreciate? I realize this is not the point or focus of your essay and maybe I would not waste too much time with this. But, I personally think it might have something to do with this.
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>		*Why exactly did home prices depreciate? I realize this is not the point or focus of your essay and maybe I would not waste too much time with this. But, I personally think it might have something to do with this. Also see an article titled "The baby boom, the baby bust, and the housing market" (written in 1989)! In other words, the evidence and research was done and available. In fact, I'd suggest using population demographics to analyze supply/demand is rather elementary. I think there must be some significant cognitive defects in the minds of everyone involved to ignore such an obvious red flag. I hope some other people can swoop in and help edit--no need to stick to the formal rules of the assignment.
 -- MatthewZorn - 23 Jun 2010

Matt, thanks a lot for the feedback. Do you have another link though? The one above is taking me to an error page.


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